Argh, my first brush with haiku in a while and I messed up with the meters. It's supposed to be 5-7-5. I did it with 7-5-7 instead. There may be some haiku variation out there that dictates 7-5-7, but I like to adhere to the rules when I can. Here's the more conforming version:
Marine Park today
Same as pre-Sandy, nearby
Salt Marsh's open, sweet!
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